Thursday, April 29, 2010

Falling into place

Hi guys.
My poetic glands misfuntioned and here I have a new poem. :p

There comes a point in everyone's life when nothing seems to go right.Everything happens the way you dont want it to be.The luck becomes your arch enemy.You feel exasperated.Like it will never get mended.

Then again we always come across someone who can always empathise with you.Who knows exactly what you are going through,who can step in you shoes.Who has the power to console and comfort you.

This poem is supposedly narrated by one such person(consoler) to his consolee :p

Speaking of this poem,I had come up with few more stanzas I wanted to add.But I restrained myself lest it should overkill the subject.

The dotted lines is the moment of silence before the poem switches into happy gear.(Atleast assume so..hehe)

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Hey there,finally found you
Your eyes sad,spirits twirled
Can you please tell me why
You've shunned yourself from the world

Dont torture yourself
They are not worth that
Why didnt you tell me before
Didn't I listen even when you wept

Ill wipe your tears
like the last time you cried a river
Dont worry am again here
as your personal pacifier

I will heal you
I will soothe you
can you believe me once more
Like you've always did

After all the mourning
Those eyes deserve some respite
Let go the bitterness
Let go the spite

Yes,sometime the day hates you
The world becomes enemy sometime
when everything is bleak
and nothing seems to rhyme

Just hold you patience and bid your time
We are alright..we will move on
Why do you feel lonely
when you have a shoulder to cry on

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And then her eyes slowly livened
The glimmer subtley came back
Her ever so charming ear-to-ear smile
Which was once contortingly held back

Look around,above your gloom
The beautiful world is ever-ready to embrace
Things always fall into place
Things always fall into place



Thanks

5 comments:

  1. dude....u seem to b a vry gud consoler....kya sahi hai yaar..!!!..jus shows the poet..the ferdn n the consoler combi in u..damn gud!!

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  2. Thanks again Prina.
    And yes the poem kinda sprouted from personal Experience :p

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  3. Gosh this is so feel goody goody!! :) Liked the tone and the rhythm.. nice one Tan.. wished to read more of it though :(

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  4. Thanks sush...guess next time wont omit nething.
    Hoping to play it some day on an acoustic.. :)

    Again TFC

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